Portfolio Surgery with Ric Bell,

Really happy with surgery, Ric gave me some pretty good feedback. Some key points are: I need to include artwork files as well as photographic images. Spreads for each project, don't use single pages, it's confusing. The image hierarchy needs to be more obvious and I need to be selective and less precious over the images I use. The Kaleidescope posters need to be on a lighter wall, preferably less  red, reducing contrast. The over arching point is that my work is of a professional standard, but my portfolio doesn't do it justice and still looks like a student's work.