Final Crit Feedback
What concept/statement/question/tone is being communicated?
A timeline of fashion, but with no personal identity.
Is it being communicated effectively?
Definitely, imagery speaks for itself, type is not necessary, but does work aesthetically.
Strengths:
Exploring a different style to comfort zone, and it has worked well.
What could be developed further?
Scale of the images as they are currently quite cramped, although general layout works really well. Could colour be introduced, perhaps within the type?
Further feedback:
Illustrations carry a slight resemblance to fashion illustration.
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